“Art is to console those
who are broken by life”
but what of the unfortunate few
who are broken by death
should they be left
to wallow in sadness and grief
or bundled up firmly
in the warmth of love
because the moss
on his lovers grave
shows the rain that pitter
pattered on the stone
and because both hands
were used to wipe away tears
none were left to bring
the shelter of an umbrella
Chitchat 
I knew you’d be awesome at it 🙂 x
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aw thank you that’s so nice of you 🙂 x
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Also, as you stated, it’s written for you to express yourself. Is it my place to try and pick apart the meaning? Or should I just revel in the simplicity of how well written it is and congratulate you on your skills? 🙂
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To be absolutely honest, I don’t really know what it’s about either.. I wrote it quite late at night and decided I’d post it today ahaha
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Haha, I tend to not always know what I write poems about. However, they do always take on a meaning and a life of their own reflecting my current mood or feelings about life.
Done ‘Unknown Venture’ and ‘Known Venture’
Come up with a good title for me and I’ll write for it 🙂
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I cab definitely relate to you there 😊 . Ooh those sound interesting, umm my suggestions for you is “open door” see what you can come up with? Anyway thanks for reading and commenting and sorry for the late reply I’ve kinda been disconnected lately 😓😊
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Alright. I’ll try and write something over the next couple days. It never takes me long but it’s finding time to sit down. Right now I’m distracted almost entirely my thigh. Screaming agony from a football injury. Wouldn’t help writing haha.
Open Door. I’ll get back to you 🙂
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Aha yeah I get that. Aw sounds painful, I hope you get better soon! Ok good luck 🙂
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Wrote it a little while ago. Not sure whether to post or not haha. I don’t like to proof read heavily and re-write things as I think it distorts what the original writing was and i like my writing to be as natural as possible.
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Post it definitely! Me too, that’s probably why I have so many typos, it makes me cringe so bad when I read back my own writing haha 🙂
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Oh, it appears I already posted it xD haha
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Yay!!!! But where?? How can I see it??
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It’s on my blog.. Haha
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I know but when I click on your thingamajig it just comes up with your about page and then it’s blank 😦
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Themajestichippo.wordpress.com
That’s my blog 🙂
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Ahh ok thanks 🙂 sorry if I’m keeping you up by the way haha
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Haha, it’s only 12, no you’re not 🙂
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Ohh yeah, I’m on holiday in France at the moment so it’s 1 am over here.
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Haha, still not that late really.. But cool. Enjoying France?
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Yeah, it’s really, really hot though. I was silly enough to go to the louvre and I’m surprised I didn’t die of heat stroke
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Ok I’ve established that I’m obviously unable to use my phone properly and I’m just really confused at the moment but I was able to get on to your blog (God knows how) and I read your poem, it’s great! (I’m commenting on here cause I haven’t quite mastered the art of commenting on your page yet 🙈) The end is actually really inspiring and all in all it just makes me ashamed of my vocabulary ahaha. But seriously, you’re a really good writer 🙂
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Haha, I’m sure you’ll figure it out in your own time xD
Thank you so much! Means so much to get good feedback 🙂 hehe
And yeh, I really can’t stand heat… Give me snow any day
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I hope so! My pleasure :). I don’t usually mind the sun but I think global warming has started to set in because I’m suddenly unable to go outside in the afternoon haha
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Haha. Might not be just global warming. Maybe you’ve changed? Haha.
Time for you to give me a new title… :p
Want an easier way to talk to me than comments?
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Yeah that’s possible, I don’t seem to enjoy watching teletubbies as much anymore haha. Hmm I’m thinking… What are you suggesting exactly aha?
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Hahaha. Teletubbies? xD duno, KiK? I don’t like comment convs much haha
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They were amazing! Or were you more into the powerpuff girls hahaha. Fair enough aha, what’s your username?
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Dragonball Z was my thing haha. Willbott should be me
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Each to their own hehe, I sent you a message but it said your phone was disconnected? o.O
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Eh? Haha. What’s your username?
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Don’t laugh.. mydinosauraddiction 😂🙈
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Amazing job! My favorite part is the rain and umbrella metaphor.
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🙂 Thank you so much! I know I’m very late I’ve just been offline for a very long time but I just wanted to say you thank you’ve been really supportive all this time and I genuinely really appreciate it! Have a great day/whenever you see this 😊💕
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Aha, no problem. Thanks, you have a great day too 🙂
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You are a phenomenal writer. Also, I nominated you for the Blogger Recognition Award:
https://myirrelevantthoughts.wordpress.com/2015/08/01/blogger-recognition-award/
Hope you’ll give it a go 🙂
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Thanks you so much, you don’t even know how much that means to me! Sorry I’m so late I’ve been a bit disconnected lately but I’m definitely going to check it out! Thanks again 🙂 💕
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Hey! I nominated you for this award! https://the2tsofhighschool.wordpress.com/2015/08/02/the-honorable-dragons-loyalty-award/
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Thank you so much I will check that out asap 😊💕
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Hey I nominated you for an award! https://lifeasan8thgrader.wordpress.com/2015/08/03/the-honorable-dragons-loyalty-award/
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Thank you very very much I will check it out asap! 😊
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